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Improvments: too blurry,pixilated camera shots,not enough narrative. take the volume down on the camera noise. needs more angles.seems more like a trailer than an opening.
Success:well edited,the music matches the acton on the screen.nice effect between shots.well placed titles,that fit in with the clip transactions.
comments: i wanted to watch more,music and transactions work well to make me want to watch on.
The general level we recieved from everyone was around level three.

Positive comments:
.Good idea for the credits
.Original idea
.Well thought out- blending in credits with camera angles and picture.
.They like the idea of a psycho stalker
.Seems well planned
.They like the idea of using a polariod
.Good research-films related to pyschological thrillers
.Good creation of suspence not revealing the stalkers identity.

Potential problems:
.Could be like the film, one hour photo, try to make it different.
.Could struggle to find an adult to play the teachers.
.Needs more of an enigma.
.Relate music and camera shots to theme
.Hiding of identity of the psycho
.Realism
.Tough storyline, may be hard to put across
.Need to maintain interest, seem scary?

Advice:
.Get older people to starr in our film.
.Show a scene of paranoia fro the girl.
.More planning for the storyline.
.Get hold of a polarioid
.Useful and relevant sound affects.
.Experiment with editing
.Produce test shots and put them onto the blog.
dont fall into the usual filming conventions, be experimental with the shots and music.