Feedback from our pitch

Feedback

From pitching out idea to the class these are the possible problems from the feedback they gave us-Hiding identity of psycho, Needs more of an enigma, Realism, Tough story line might be hard to make it look good, Getting an adult to play as the teacher, Can’t make it obvious who the stalker is, Sound effects, If it doesn’t creep me out then might lose interest.

The positive comments we received were- likes psycho stalker idea, seems well planned, good idea, liked the Polaroid idea, good original ideas, good research, suspense- the audience will want to find out who the stalker is, like the idea of flash and sound effects .

The advice and suggestions we received were - Need more than two suspects, show a scene of paranoia with girl (spinning ), get a good stalker to act as the teacher, plan the story line better, Use adults to act because it makes it more realistic, Use and older person for the teacher, experiment with the edit to see what effects you can use, and try and use different and unique sound effects in your film, Use unusual shots when editing, To keep the sense of it being psychological don’t fall into usual film conventions.